Yeah Write Microstory #193 – Forever

Hidden nerves,
Not just his but my own too.

There was something in his pocket,
And somehow, I just knew.

Still a beautiful shock,
As he opened the box.

So big,
Yet so small.

Then he asked me,
Those four little words.

8 responses to “Yeah Write Microstory #193 – Forever”

  1. What a perfect little box of love and joy. (:

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  2. How sweetly you’ve captured that suspended moment between hope and actuality.

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  3. The magical 4 words. this is so romanatic.

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    Jennifer G. Knoblock

    Wonderful capture of emotion. Love “Still a beautiful shock.”

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    1. Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it 🙂

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  5. You took our heart away with your words

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    1. Thank you Ruby, and as horrible as it probably sounds I’m glad it did!

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