13 responses to “Yeah Write Microstory #233 – Red”

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   innatejames

   October 2, 2015 at 7:30 am

   You nailed the self-defeated tone here. Nice work!

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      Anna Elizabeth

      October 2, 2015 at 1:57 pm

      Thank you! I am so glad you liked it 🙂

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   GennaClaire

   October 2, 2015 at 2:38 am

   Beautiful and poetic. Love “I don’t know anymore | Why I’m walking here” –G

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      Anna Elizabeth

      October 2, 2015 at 1:56 pm

      Thank you! 🙂 I’m glad you liked it.

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   Kathy Combs (@KathyCombs16)

   October 2, 2015 at 2:19 am

   Vivid descriptions. Wasn’t quite sure what was going on at first, but I figured it out in the end..yay me. Not sure I would ever want to taste that. I am sure it is one that would haunt a soul forever.

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   ellenbehm

   October 2, 2015 at 1:19 am

   I know that taste.

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   Jen

   October 1, 2015 at 11:42 pm

   Love the ending, especially!

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      Anna Elizabeth

      October 2, 2015 at 1:54 pm

      Thank you! 🙂

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   Tina

   October 1, 2015 at 10:33 am

   I was a little confused about what was happening, but I got the general idea. Vivid image!

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      Anna Elizabeth

      October 1, 2015 at 8:21 pm

      Thanks for the feedback, I’ll keep it in mind 🙂 Thank you!

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         Cyn K

         October 2, 2015 at 11:51 am

         I didn’t mind re-reading this to put the first lines in context with what you reveal in the end.

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   Ruby Manchanda

   October 1, 2015 at 2:55 am

   Good work with prompt

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      Anna Elizabeth

      October 1, 2015 at 8:20 pm

      Thank you 🙂

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